Wednesday, November 30, 2005

How To Make Me Proud

My Hero

By Mackenzie


A hero is someone you admire or look up to. There are many people in this world I might consider my hero. Out of all those people I chose my older brother Dillon because he is really cool, a good roll model, and very nice.

My brother is really cool because he doesn't ignore me. Also because once when I was little, these two boys that were older than me were pushing me around. Then my brother helped me out. He is also really cool because he never tries to hurt me... well besides the occasional punch or hit in the head.

Dillon is a good roll model because he always gets on the honor roll. Also because this one time he had a friend that had an encounter with the police and was always getting into trouble. Then he met Dillon. Dillon got him to stop getting in to trouble. Most of all, my brother is a good roll model for me because he isn't afraid to show what he likes, his style, or his real personality.

My brother is really nice to me. He helps me with homework all the time. Dillon is also nice because he intentionally buys two player video games so I can play with him. Lastly, my brother is very nice because he lets me hang out with him and his friends when they're over.

Ok, so I know since we're siblings we’re supposed to fight and hate each other. I also know I can be annoying and a pain in the neck, but what makes him a good hero is that he's really cool, a good roll model, and very nice. What makes him a great hero and an awesome brother is that he loves me.

The End


2 comments:

Rebecca said...

Paige,
Wow. You are raising two wonderful people. This essay says a lot about you and Tater. It's nice to know that there are parents who are going to send two exceptional individuals into the world and make it a nicer place.
Peace,
Bec.

Annie, The Evil Queen said...

This is the sweetest thing I've read in ages. I laughed, I cried.... I just love your kids. They are a testament to your "alternative parenting."